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Just so you know,
   I can only give you everything I have
         once.

After that, we're both left
   with pebbles falling from our mouths,
        grasping desperately at dusty meaning.

Shining and slick,
   the stones bubble up and spill,
         revealing nothing
  but our own reflections.
©2006-2009 ~scarredsodeep
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This is amazing, once again. It holds some things that I hold in my mind of course, or so I can relate. Such beautiful words you use... I love the way you don't repeat yourself through your art, absolutely beautiful.

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I'm so Davey I piss glitter
Reflections Of Affections....The Person You Wish ..Should Be reading Your Work..It Is Worthy..Of Command

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~They say most of your brain shuts down in cryo-sleep. All but the primitive side, the animal side. No wonder I'm still awake.~
its really good and im sorry... again
if u need to talk...
you know

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Life's a box of chocolates you never know what you're going to get
Shit I got coconut
I HATE COCONUT!
Beautiful.

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Pick up your paper, and walk off the edge of the world.
Honestly one of the best poems you've ever written except the word dusty takes you out of the pebble imagery. :heart::heart:

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"Today I feel euphorian." -Ogden Nash
True and sadly wonderful.

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[->-]
/ ),)\
| ,)_),) Let the Penguinvasion begin.
Love your signature! And you!

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I'll keep my own, and fuck the rest.

Of Blue and Grey [link]
The meaning is not the pebble. The meaning is something separate from the slick and shining pebbles; the meaning is dusty and forgotten and unused. Therefore, it should remove itself from the pebbles. I do understand that it interferes with the flow, though. :glomp:

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I'll keep my own, and fuck the rest.

Of Blue and Grey [link]
So are you.

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I'll keep my own, and fuck the rest.

Of Blue and Grey [link]
:smooch: I know.

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I'll keep my own, and fuck the rest.

Of Blue and Grey [link]

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